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ToK Essay & Exhibition Help
I can provide a range of different support options to help you to be successful on your ToK course. I can give you help with your ToK Essay or ToK Exhibition.
i provide 4 main services to help you complete your essay/exhibition
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ToK Essay / Exhibition Draft Written Feedback
If you have written your ToK Essay / Exhibition, but want written feedback before you submit it to your teacher we can offer you that feedback. We can tell you the most likely score that it will achieve, and help you to develop the essay / Exhibition for a higher score. Sessions last 45 minutes, in which we will use the IB Assessment Instrument (assessment rubric) to identify areas of strength, areas for development, application, interpretation, analysis, evaluation and implications. This service is designed to help you to ‘fine tune’ your essay before submission.
NB. The Draft Submission is an absolutely key stage in the essay process as this is the only stage when your ToK teacher can you give you written feedback. You significantly improve the probability of receiving a high score for the ToK Essay by submitting a fully completed Draft essay as this gives your teacher more content to feedback on (which gives you more tips to improve the essay).
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tok essay coaching (online)
Over a number of sessions I can work with you to develop your ToK Essay. I will take you from question selection, through planning, writing to final essay submission.
Using a structured programme of stages and techniques which have been successful over many years, with many students, I can help you to write an effective essay with minimal stress and anxiety. We will meet online (sessions last 45 minutes) in which you will discuss what’s been done and what’s next.
I will advise you on what’s best for your next steps, and how to achieve that next stage. Over the sessions we will build your understanding and skills.
emergency tok essay & exhibition help
If the Draft or Final Submission date is very close, and you find that you need emergency help I have a 10 hour turnaround service available.
This is for students who require significant help in a short period of time.
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tok exhibition commentary final draft feedback (online)
You will receive detailed written feedback on your ToK Essay or Exhibition commentary, and follow this up with an online coaching session for further clarification. This will help you to understand the written feedback, and the next steps for improvement.
We use the IB ToK Exhibition Assessment Instrument (the marking rubric) to show you areas of strength and areas for development in the commentary.
We can help you with the areas of development until you have a commentary that you are happy to submit.
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tok exhibition coaching (online)
If you’re just starting out putting together a ToK Exhibition I can help you to choose the right IA prompt, develop perspectives relating to the prompt and to choose objects relating to those perspectives.
We can help you to develop your Commentary up to final submission of the written piece.
RESOURCES TO HELP YOU
ToK Essay Guidance Notes
A mini-textbook specific to your chosen title.
Guidance notes contain knowledge arguments, real‑life examples, and evaluation points.
In the May 24 session, over 500 students used TokToday Guidance Notes to help to write their ToK Essay
FEEDBACK INCLUDES:
“Thanks - the guidance notes explained everything really clearly”
– Lizzie from Hong Kong
“Without these notes, I would not have gotten an A.”
– Arnold from Singapore
ToK Grades of students using toktoday Guidance notes
A: 72%
B: 28%
*Self-reported grades of May 24 Sessions students.
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