ToK Essay Written Feedback

If you have written your ToK Essay, but want feedback before you submit it to your teacher (either draft or final submission) we have a service that can offer you that feedback. We use the IB ToK Essay Assessment Instrument (the marking rubric) to show you areas of strength and areas for development in the essay. An example of the detailed written feedback on the ToK Essay that you will receive can be found at this link.

Examples of the annotations on your Tok Essay that you will receive can be found at this link.

Once you have paid for written feedback via this portal send an email to Daniel@TokToday.com with a Google Docs link to your Draft Essay (ensure that it has open edit access rights), or in Word .docx format, or attach it as a PDF to the email.

Written feedback will be sent in PDF form to the email address that you supply within 24 - 72hrs of receipt of payment / the essay (whichever is sent last).

NB:

(i) Written Feedback on Essays will be given only once. Each instance of further written feedback on subsequent drafts of the essay will require an additional order for written feedback made from this page.

(ii) Ensure that the version of the essay sent is the final version that you want to be reviewed. Any subsequent changes, amendments or additions to the essay will require the placement of a new order.