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ToK Essay: Balancing Real World Examples and Theory of Knowledge Analysis

I recently reconnected with a friend after a significant amount of time. When he asked about my current endeavors, I shared about the launch of my website and YouTube channel, focusing on Theory of Knowledge (ToK) support. His cheeky response - "Too much RLS not enough ToK?" - inspired this blog post, a critical issue we often encounter when reviewing ToK essays.

The Dilemma of Too Much RLS and Not Enough ToK

RLS stands for Real Life Situation. It refers to real-world contexts or examples, providing the practical side to your ToK essay. ToK, on the other hand, represents the Theory of Knowledge content, which includes the discussion of knowledge acquisition, knowledge construction, methodology, scope, perspectives, and other related concepts.

 

In this article, the third of a four-part series on writing ToK essays, we tackle the recurring issue that plagues most ToK essays—too much emphasis on RLS and inadequate focus on ToK content. This imbalance is prevalent in around 80% of ToK drafts that I've reviewed, and approximately half of all the ToK essays I evaluated as an examiner were also guilty of this imbalance.

In this article, the third of a four-part series on writing ToK essays, we tackle the recurring issue that plagues most ToK essays—too much emphasis on RLS and inadequate focus on ToK content. This imbalance is prevalent in around 80% of ToK drafts that I've reviewed, and approximately half of all the ToK essays I evaluated as an examiner were also guilty of this imbalance.

The first criterion in the ToK Essay assessment rubric requires a sustained focus on the essay title. Essays leaning more towards the RLS than ToK content often lack this necessary focus.

Striking the Right Balance Between RLS and ToK Content

You may be wondering how much ToK content should be included relative to RLS content. Although there is no definitive answer—it varies depending on the essay title, knowledge argument, RLS used, writing style, and other factors—there are certain tests we can apply to gauge what RLS content to include and what to exclude.

For each sentence of RLS content, ask yourself these questions:

  1. Does this sentence contribute to the knowledge argument I'm making?

  2. Does the sentence confirm or evidence the knowledge argument I am making?

  3. Is this sentence directly linked to the essay title?

Applying these tests usually results in a rough balance of 80% ToK content and 20% RLS content. There might be exceptions, but generally, the RLS content shouldn't significantly exceed this guideline.

Applying the Balance: A ToK Essay Example

To better understand this concept, let's analyse two responses to the knowledge claim: "Not everything can be explained by AoK The Natural Sciences because scientific explanations are a product of that which is known, and not everything is yet known."

Let’s look at an excerpt Student A’s essay:

The Duck Billed Platypus was first encountered by Europeans in Australia in 1798. The second Governor of New South Wales sent a sketch and pelt to the Natural History Museum in London ( collection founded in the 1750s by Sir Hans Sloane in Bloomsbury London). The biological and natural scientists at the museum were perplexed by the Platypus as it has a beak like a bird, lays eggs like a bird or reptile, feeds milk to its young like a mammal, has fur like a mammal, has venom like a reptile, In his 1802 book, An Account of the English Colony in New South Wales, Colonel David Collins wrote 'the most extraordinary circumstance observed in its structure was, it having instead of the mouth of an animal, the upper and lower mandibles of a duck.'

Scientists thought the Duck billed Platypus was a hoax as they couldn’t classify it. This shows that not everything can be explained by AoK The Natural Sciences.

Student A

Now let's look at Student B's Essay:

The claim that scientific knowledge can’t explain everything because scientific explanations are a response to pre-existing knowledge can be illustrated looking at the case of the Duck Billed Platypus. When the platypus was first encountered by Europeans in 1798 its phenotypical characteristics (e.g. it has a bill, lays eggs, produces milk, has venom) prevented it from fitting neatly into any single taxonomic class. The classification system at that time had been developed based on all animals that had been encountered up until that point (pre-existing knowledge). Upon encountering an animal that did not fit the classification system scientists had to create a new order (called Monotremata) that could account for the combination of characteristics of the Platypus. This demonstrates that pre-existing scientific knowledge may not be able to explain everything. However the scientific method enables the scientific framework to adapt to new knowledge, and for that new knowledge to be incorporated into the body of scientific knowledge.

Student B

Student A's essay focuses heavily on the story of the platypus discovery, while Student B's response emphasizes the limitations of pre-existing scientific knowledge, using the platypus as a reference point.

Student A's approach falls into the "too much RLS, not enough ToK" pitfall. While it provides a captivating narrative, it fails to highlight the knowledge argument or directly answer the essay title. On the contrary, Student B's essay maintains a stronger balance between RLS and ToK content, demonstrating a comprehensive understanding of the ToK framework while providing relevant real-world context.

The Takeaway

Ensuring the right balance between RLS and ToK content is pivotal to writing a compelling ToK essay. It allows for a more precise exploration of knowledge issues, steering clear of the all-too-common mistake of overusing real-world examples at the expense of substantial ToK analysis.

 

For more insights into avoiding common mistakes in ToK essays, check out the blogpost, "The 3 Most Frequent Mistakes on the ToK Essay". And for extensive guidance, consider my popular e-book, "How to Write The ToK Essay in 6 Easy Steps".

Stay tuned for the final post in this series, "How to Get an A in The ToK Essay", and remember to maintain a fine balance in your essays for a more impactful ToK exploration.

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The Significance of Structure in a ToK Essay: Lessons from an Octopus, a Skyscraper, and a Snowflake

ToK Essay Mini Series 2/4

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Today, let's delve into an important, yet often overlooked aspect of your ToK journey: the structure in ToK essay.

 

To illustrate, let's take three intriguing examples: an octopus, a skyscraper, and a snowflake. What do they have in common? They all possess unique structures that define their purpose.

Echoing the thoughts of Barthes and Lacan: Structure matters!

Understanding the Importance of Structure in a ToK Essay

The question, “What structure am I supposed to use for my ToK Essay?” is one I frequently hear from my students. My answer: there is no universally correct structure. However, to achieve a high score, you need to integrate key components identified in the marking scheme. These are:

  1. Areas of Knowledge (& therefore elements of The Knowledge Framework).

  2. Knowledge Arguments.

  3. The Implications of Knowledge Arguments.

  4. Evaluation of Knowledge Arguments.

Potential Structures for a ToK Essay

 

Knowing these four requirements, we can start considering the potential structures for a ToK essay. A straightforward and often-used structure is shown here.

This common structure in a ToK essay is clear, easy to follow, and sufficient for scoring 9/10. Yet, you might want to develop a different structure to better present your arguments or to serve the function/purpose of the knowledge arguments in your essay. That's perfectly fine.

Planning and Choosing the Right Structure

I recommend starting with the basic structure outlined above. As your plan evolves, it will become clear whether a different structure might better serve your argument. In my e-book, "How to Write the ToK Essay in 6 Easy Steps," I explore the strengths and drawbacks of six different essay structures, complete with examples.

Planning: The Heart of a High-Scoring ToK Essay

Let's now turn our attention to the significance of planning. It's essential to all assignments in your Diploma Programme, but it's probably most crucial in the ToK essay.

You need to spend considerable time pondering the prompt, drafting knowledge arguments, and researching real-life examples to illustrate those arguments. This process is planning, and it's what makes writing the ToK Essay enjoyable. I generally advise spending 80% of your time planning and 20% writing. The essay is only 1600 words long; with a clear plan and robust understanding of the prompt, you can pen those words in 4 hours or less.

Structure Isn't Only for ToK

Although this post wasn't about the philosophy of structuralism, it's very pertinent to Theory of Knowledge. You can check back a couple of weeks to see the posts about Structuralism

 

For more help or advice with ToK, we have an array of resources available at ToKToday.com, including coaching and written feedback. Last year many students also used the ebook, “How to Write the ToK Essay in 6 Easy Steps,” it is brimming with advice on things like the essay structure, use of ToK concepts, and arguments.

Thank you for reading, and best of luck with your ToK learning. Remember, in your journey of ToK, much like in the world of the octopus, the skyscraper, and the snowflake, structure matters!

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Why the Tortoise Holds the Key to an A in ToK Essay

ToK Essay Mini Series #1 / 4.

If you've been following the ToKToday videos or blog for some time, you might have noticed a recurring character that frequents our posts - the tortoise. What does it represent and how can it help you secure an A in your ToK Essay? Let's explore.

 

This tortoise, an emblem of patience and perseverance, is inspired by Aesop's fable, 'The Hare and the Tortoise.' If you're not familiar with this tale, I have linked it here. The moral of the story is straightforward yet profound - slow and steady wins the race. It is far more effective to progress at a steady pace than to rush at the last moment.

This tortoise, an emblem of patience and perseverance, is inspired by Aesop's fable, 'The Hare and the Tortoise.' If you're not familiar with this tale, I encourage you to take a few minutes to familiarize yourself with it (link in the description). The moral of the story is straightforward yet profound - slow and steady wins the race. It is far more effective to progress at a steady pace than to rush at the last moment.

ToK Learning: A Slow and Steady Process

This time-tested wisdom is particularly applicable to our learning journey in Theory of Knowledge (ToK). The concepts and ideas in ToK may be complex, but they are far from insurmountable. The trick is to give them the time they deserve. You need to construct an understanding of ToK knowledge gradually. After all, you cannot train for a marathon in a day, and likewise, a ToK Essay or Exhibition Commentary can't be written overnight - well, technically, it can, but it's unlikely to hit the high standards you're aiming for.

My Experience With Students Worldwide

Over the years, I've had the privilege of assisting students globally with their ToK Essays and Exhibitions. Most of them heeded my advice, starting their Essay or Exhibition weeks before the deadline. This allowed us ample time to build their comprehension of the concepts, refine the knowledge arguments they wanted to use, and find fitting real-world examples to illustrate those arguments.

However, a handful of students have reached out in the eleventh hour, requesting written feedback and a grade for their Essay or Exhibition Commentary. Quite often, their work, done in haste, doesn't match up to their expectations. A grade of 3-4/10 may come as a shock to those aiming for 9-10/10. They naturally want to know how they can improve. While I'm always eager to guide them towards achieving higher grades, doing so often entails significant structural changes to the essay and an in-depth understanding of ToK, which requires considerable time.

Be Like the Tortoise, Not the Hare

The bottom line? Emulate the tortoise. Run a slow, steady race over a few weeks, and you'll find yourself with a far superior essay than if you leave everything until the last minute.

Here are some top tips for creating an excellent ToK Essay or Exhibition Commentary:

  1. Time Allocation: Start early. Months are better than weeks, and weeks are significantly better than just a few days.

  2. Planning is Key: The essay requires substantial planning, reading, and critical thinking. These activities are vital for achieving top marks.

  3. Professional Guidance: If you wish to work with me, the best time to start our collaboration is before you submit your draft to your teacher for feedback. While I am available at any stage, starting early allows us to make the most out of our time together.

  4. Last-Minute Emergencies: Sometimes, life throws us off course. If you find yourself without an essay or Exhibition Commentary close to the submission deadline, don't panic. Contact me and we can quickly get a solid piece together that will ensure you pass ToK.

 

At ToKToday, we have a wealth of resources to support your ToK journey. This includes our popular eBook, "How to Write the ToK Essay in 6 Easy Steps" which provides valuable advice on essay structure, the use of ToK concepts, and argument construction.

Remember, to secure that coveted A in your ToK essay, heed the wisdom of the tortoise: slow and steady wins the race.

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Understanding Intuition in the Context of ToK

Intuition is often seen as a mysterious, yet common and powerful form of knowledge. It sits in a space between a form of knowledge and an emotional response. Notably, we base many of our vital decisions (romantic partners, jobs, etc) on intuition. However, the role of intuition in decision making isn't very well understood. When it comes to experience, intuition often doesn't seem to match up with reason-based ways of knowing.

How Intuition and Emotions Fit Into ToK

A Theory of Knowledge (ToK) that includes intuition must also consider whether emotions are a form of knowledge. Neglecting intuition (or other emotions) in ToK misses some of the most critical influences on what we know, and why we know it. Hence, it's important to discuss intuition as a form of knowledge in ToK.

AoK Natural Sciences: Defining Intuition

We kick off with AoK Natural Sciences. Volz and Zander (2009) define intuition as a non-conscious process influencing behaviour, which operates based on implicitly acquired knowledge and signals to higher processing areas in the conscious brain. This takes us straight to the realm of AoK Human Sciences, especially neuro-psychology.

Neuro-Psychology and Intuition in ToK

To see intuition as more than an elusive meta-reality, we can examine cognitive processing in the memory and attention systems. Intuition might be understood as a process of linking implicit memories to conscious and subconscious memory systems. This perspective on intuition leads us to several intriguing knowledge questions about physical sensory perception.

Voss & Paller’s research published in Nature Neuroscience in 2009, provides evidence that the retrieval of explicit and implicit memories involves distinct neural substrates and mechanisms.

Essentially the research shows that stimuli encoded and stored whilst attention was diverted elsewhere were remembered more strongly than stimuli which were directly encoded through volition. As such this research indicates that intuition is most probably a product of learned behaviour rather than an innate ‘sixth sense’. In ToK terms this means that intuitive knowledge is formed indirectly without the proactive volition of the knower - we’ll call this the “indirect learning hypothesis”.

Knowledge Questions about Sensory Perception in ToK

The 'indirect learning' hypothesis of intuition brings forth a range of interesting knowledge(ish) questions about physical sensory perception, such as:

  • Is evolved niche development the cause or consequence of the development of sense perception?

  • Why did visual perception become the primary human sense?

  • Have we 'lost' perceptual senses beyond those currently known?

  • Is the residual data from lost/declining senses now labelled as intuition?

If Intuition is based on neurological processes of perception and learning (albeit indirect learning) then we should be able to improve decision making which is apparently based on ‘intuition’. This is exactly what Wan et al (2012) demonstrated with the training of novices in the game of Shogi (Japanese Chess). They trained the novices for 15 weeks, whilst also monitoring neural activation through fMRI. Wan et al took ‘next-move’ knowledge as being indicative of the knowledge that we usually label as ‘intuitive knowledge’. They compared professional players with amateurs, and found that professionals had a significantly higher level of stimulation of the caudate nucleus, an area in the dorsal of the Basal Ganglia. The role of the caudate nucleus in voluntary motor functioning has long been known, we are now beginning to understand that it also has a role in spatial mnemonics – which is similar in aspect to muscle memory. It is clear that indirect learning is involved in muscle memory, and other sensory based memories, as such the neurological basis for intuition becomes established.

The Importance of Intuition in ToK

In ToK terms this means that intuitive knowledge forms perception, and more pertinently perspective. These ‘frameworks of knowledge’ are acquired / socially constructed (through communities of knowers). However, they have an empirical biological base. This draws into focus the question of free will vs determinism - To what extent are we free to acquire / produce knowledge independently through volition, and to what extent is the acquisition & production of knowledge bound by external determinants such as biological conditioning ? This is even more acute given that the learning that leads to intuition is involuntary and indirect - ie we don’t choose to do it, we don’t know we’re doing it, and we have little control over it ! 

The claim that intuition has a neurological basis should be of interest to ToK students because firstly it gives an empirical basis for knowledge without evidence. Secondly, it starts to bring ‘scientific evidence’ to the constraints on our knowledge world. It leads us into the idea that our knowledge frameworks are, to a degree, the product of the limited boundaries of our biology. As such this claim leads to the possibility of currently unspecified AoK’s, those which have possibly ‘declined’ / lost during human evolution.

Intuition's Neurological Basis and its Impact on ToK

n conclusion I come back to the power of intuition, it’s a form of knowledge that we rely upon to validate other other forms of knowledge, and sometimes to make important decisions. Neuroscience is increasingly showing us that intuition is actually a learned set of skills and knowledge. As such it should be possible for us to teach people to be more intuitive. This would lead to better, and faster, decision making. As such knowledge of intuition becomes both an individual and social good.

In conclusion, intuition is a powerful form of knowledge that we rely on to validate other forms of knowledge and make important decisions. Neuroscience is increasingly showing us that intuition is actually a learned set of skills and knowledge. Therefore, it should be possible to teach people to be more intuitive, leading to better and faster decision making. Thus, knowledge of intuition becomes both an individual and social good.

ToK Exhibition Preparation

If you're preparing your ToK Exhibition, or deciding which ToK Exhibition prompt to use, be sure to check out our range of ToK Exhibition e-books - ToK Exhibition prompts explained. They provide step-by-step ways of developing knowledge arguments for each ToK Exhibition prompt, along with examples of objects that you could use. You can pick up the e-book of all prompts explained, or get an e-book for just 5 of the prompts, and we even have e-books explaining just the individual most popular prompts - whichever best suits your needs.

We also have resources to help you with your ToK Essay, and coaching services offered here.

Stay TokTastic my friends,
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Post-Structuralism and ToK

Why do we have to do ToK ?! I have heard a few DP students cry out in the past.  “Why examine the construction of everything we have ever known when there’s cricket, ice-cream and cake ?” I have replied rather sarcastically. However, maybe those ToK resistant students were making a more philosophical point - maybe they were rejecting the essential structuralism underlying the Theory of Knowledge (ToK). Today on ToKToday we consider the post-structuralists!

Post-structuralism and ToK.

My last 2 blogs were on Structuralism - the core philosophical approach on which ToK is built. Today we’re going to talk about the criticisms of structuralism, and alternative approaches to thinking about knowledge. Structuralism emphasises underlying structures in determining meaning and knowledge. This has been criticised by thinkers like Jacques Derrida, Jacques Lacan, Michel Foucault, and Pierre Bourdieu, these writers moved beyond structuralism to what's often referred to as post-structuralism.

The Pillars of Post-structuralism and ToK: Derrida and Deconstruction

Derrida, a key figure in this movement, critiqued the structuralist focus on binary oppositions and stable structures. He introduced the concept of "deconstruction," challenging the idea that meaning could be fixed within a structure. Instead, he suggested that meaning was always deferred, in a constant play of signification. Derrida criticised structuralism's attempt to reach a final interpretation or an ultimate structure, asserting that such a task was impossible as every interpretation could be deconstructed further.

Jacques Lacan's Contribution to Post-structuralism and ToK

Lacan, a psychoanalyst, extended structuralism into the realm of the unconscious mind but also critiqued its limitations. While he used Saussure's linguistic model to understand the unconscious, he argued that structuralism failed to account for the complexity of human subjectivity. For Lacan, the subject's position within a structure was always fraught with inconsistencies and contradictions. This resulted from what he called the "Real," a dimension of experience that resists symbolisation and hence disrupts the symbolic structures of language.

Michel Foucault's Critique in the Light of Post-structuralism and ToK

Foucault's critique revolved around power relations and discourse. He rejected the idea of stable, universal structures, arguing that what appears as a structure is often a reflection of prevailing power relations. For Foucault, structures such as societal norms or discourses are historically contingent, shaped by power and subject to change. Therefore, structuralism's quest for universal structures was, in Foucault's view, misguided.

Pierre Bourdieu and the Dynamics of Post-structuralism and ToK

Bourdieu, a sociologist, criticised structuralism for its deterministic view of social structures. While acknowledging the influence of structures such as class, gender, or race, Bourdieu proposed the concept of "habitus" – a set of dispositions that individuals internalise from their social conditions but which also enable them to act and innovate. This was his way of reintroducing agency into the structuralist framework, arguing that individuals are not just passive products of structures but also agents capable of transforming them.

These criticisms point to common themes: the limitations of binary oppositions in structuralist thought, the neglect of power relations and historical contingency, and the downplaying of individual agency. Yet, despite these critiques, it's important to note that these thinkers built upon structuralist insights. Derrida's deconstruction relied on close readings of texts, Foucault's discursive structures were still structures, and Bourdieu's habitus was a way of mediating between individuals and structures.

Post-structuralism and ToK: A Conclusion

In essence, while post-structuralists critiqued structuralism, they also extended and transformed it, leading to a richer understanding of how structures shape, and are shaped by, our experiences and actions. It is through this dialectic of critique and development that knowledge advances, offering us increasingly refined lenses to interpret and engage with the world.

I hope that you enjoyed exploring the fascinating journey of post-structuralism and its impact on ToK !

For extra help with your ToK Essay or Exhibition, we have loads of resources available on from our student support page, including ToK coaching, written feedback and the ever-popular e-book, How to Write the ToK Essay in 6 Easy Steps.

If you’re doing your ToK Essay you may be interested in:

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3 Tips for choosing your ToK Essay Title.

Scientific Anomalies in the production of knowledge.

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Linking the object to the Prompt,

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Bertrand Russell and ToK

Bertrand Russell and ToK: A Historic Connection

This is Bertrand Russell, he wrote the book on Theory of Knowledge. He actually wrote the book called Theory of Knowledge back in 1913 which brought together the ideas which created ToK as we know it. We need to talk about Bertrand Russell.

Bertrand Russell: A Beacon in the Structuralism Movement

English philosopher Bertrand Russell was a leading light in the Structuralism movement. My last blog was an introduction to structuralism, explaining why it is key for ToK.

Bertrand Russell, ToK, and the Influences of Henri Poincare

To understand Bertrand Russell’s role in structuralism, and consequently the founding of ToK we need to go back to the work of French Mathematician Henri Poincare

Poincare laid the foundations for Epistemic structural realism, this is a perspective on the nature of scientific knowledge. Epistemic Structural realism was proposed as a compromise between scientific realism and instrumentalism, it states that our best scientific theories provide a correct account of the structure of the world, but not necessarily of its nature or ontology.

Poincaré, a mathematician and physicist, suggested that while we may not know the true nature of things, we can discern their relationships, which are more real and stable. He used mathematics as an example, stating that the relationships between mathematical entities (like numbers or geometric shapes) were more fundamental than the entities themselves.

Knowledge by Acquaintance vs Knowledge by Description: Bertrand Russell's Perspective

Bertrand Russell, in the early 20th century, advanced this idea by distinguishing between "knowledge by acquaintance" and "knowledge by description". He asserted that our direct, immediate experiences (acquaintance) were limited and that much of our knowledge was derived from the relations or structures that we could infer (description). Russell's work in logic and the philosophy of mathematics, with its focus on structural relationships, further developed the structuralist perspective.

Building upon these early ideas, John Worrall in the late 20th century proposed "Structural Realism" as a solution to the pessimistic meta-induction problem in the philosophy of science. This problem suggests that since many successful past scientific theories have been discarded, our current successful theories are likely to be discarded in the future as well. Worrall argued that while theories do change, what tends to remain are the structural aspects. So, it is the structure of the world that our theories get right, not necessarily the nature of its constituents.

James Ladyman, a contemporary philosopher, further refined this to "Ontic Structural Realism", which posits that there are no objects or entities at the fundamental level of physics, only structures.

Bertrand Russell, ToK, and the Modern Implications of Epistemic Structuralism

To appreciate this perspective, consider the transition from classical mechanics to quantum mechanics. Newtonian physics, with its focus on solid particles and forces, was replaced by a quantum field theory, with its emphasis on energy fields and probabilities. Yet, despite this dramatic change in our understanding, many of the structural aspects, like conservation laws and symmetries, persisted.

In the real world, consider how we understand social networks. We may not know the detailed personal characteristics of every individual in a network (akin to the entities), but we can often make accurate predictions based on the structure of the network – who is connected to whom, the number of connections, etc. The structure provides us with knowledge, even when the nature of individual elements remains unknown.

Epistemic structuralism has implications in many areas of knowledge. In sciences, it emphasizes the importance of relational properties, like the mathematical equations that describe natural phenomena. In social sciences, it underscores the significance of social, economic, and political structures in shaping individual experiences.

Critiquing Structuralism: Insights from Bertrand Russell and ToK

Critics, however, argue that it is nearly impossible to separate structure from the objects that constitute it, and it undervalues the role of entities in constituting the world. Despite these critiques, structuralism provides a unique perspective on knowledge production, reminding us that understanding the world often requires looking beyond individual objects or experiences, focusing instead on the relationships and structures that bind them together. We’re going to be looking at these critics in a lot more detail in the next, and final, blog in this series on structuralism.

For extra help with your ToK Essay or Exhibition, we have loads of resources available on from our student support page, including ToK coaching, written feedback and the ever-popular e-book, How to Write the ToK Essay in 6 Easy Steps.

If you’re doing your ToK Essay you may be interested in:

The Ebook : How to Write the ToK Essay in 6 Easy Steps

3 Tips for choosing your ToK Essay Title.

Scientific Anomalies in the production of knowledge.

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Linking the object to the Prompt,

Do the objects need to be personal?

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ToK and Structuralism: A Study of Knowledge or Relationships?

Structuralism and ToK sounds complex, let's start with a straightforward question:

Is ToK (Theory of Knowledge) the study of knowledge or is it actually the study of the relationship between phenomena? We can explore this using some illustrative examples.

Understanding the World Through Structuralism

Using the masterful drawings by Dutch artist MC Escher, we can delve deeper into these relationships. Notice the blue and white-grey fish; Do they define each other? Could one exist without the other? Are the fish at all important, or is it the relationship between them which is vital?

Similarly, look at this other illustration. The color of the animal does not accord with a specific animal, so is the shape determined by the animals around it? This brings us to the idea of structuralism, where it's the relationships between things that define them rather than the things themselves. This concept forms the backbone of much of what we learn in ToK.

Some of the people who wrote the theory of knowledge believe that it is the relationship between things which forms knowledge rather than the knowledge itself. These people are called Structuralists, and their thinking informs much of what we learn in ToK. Therefore I think we need to look at structuralism in more detail.

The Birth and Expansion of Structuralism

Structuralism emerged in the early 20th century through the work of linguists like Ferdinand de Saussure and later expanded to other fields by scholars such as Claude Lévi-Strauss in anthropology and Louis Althusser in philosophy. Structuralism is a way of understanding how we interpret and construct meaning from our experiences, and therefore it is one way of explaining how we produce and acquire knowledge.

Understanding Structuralism: Relationships and Structures

At its core, structuralism proposes that our understanding of reality is not based on individual elements themselves, but rather on the relationships and structures that connect these elements. De Saussure argued that language, for instance, functions not due to the inherent meanings of words, but because of the differential network of relationships between them. For example, we understand the meaning of "day" because we understand its difference from "night"

Structuralism: Binary opposite relations.

In this perspective, meaning is constituted through binary oppositions and relations, implying that the essence of any element can only be comprehended in its relation to others within a given structure. This idea rejects the notion of intrinsic meaning, emphasising instead the collective structures that underpin our understanding and knowledge. As such knowledge does not have inherent meaning, but is relative and contestable.

Structuralism and ToK: Decoding the Interconnectedness

Applying this to ToK, the structuralist view suggests that these structures are not just external, but also internalised and form a crucial part of our cognitive apparatus. ToK Essay prompts often delve into the organisation & classification of knowledge, and many ToK Exhibition questions address structuralism.

Structuralism in Areas of Knowledge

In AoK The Arts, and Optional Themes Knowledge and Language, religion and indigenous societies, structuralist ideas, as proposed by Claude Lévi-Strauss, extend to the study of cultures. These ideas lead us to focus not on the knowledge itself, but on the underlying structures that define it. Strauss proposed that cultural phenomena like myths, rituals, and social norms can be understood as systems of symbolic communication operating on structural laws. The meanings of these phenomena emerge from their position within a larger, structured set of cultural relations.

As such we’re not focussing on the knowledge itself (e.g. knowledge as objects), but we’re looking at the underlying structures on which we place, or define knowledge. You will have come across this in many of your hexagon diploma studies. For example in Language A you may have looked at textual structures, story arcs or narrative structures. In Language B you will have looked at verb structures. In Individuals and Societies & Natural Sciences you may have looked at the methodology for carrying out research, and so on. The underlying structures on which knowledge is formed and defined are all around us.

Structuralism and Its Profound Impact

Structuralism’s core tenet, that meaning and knowledge are dependent on structures of relationships, has profoundly shaped our understanding of knowledge, language, culture, and cognition. It remains a critical tool for exploring how we generate and organise knowledge, offering deep insights into the relational nature of meaning and understanding.

Looking Ahead: Exploring Structuralism Further in ToK

In the next blog in this mini-series on Structuralism and ToK, I will look at how the work of some key structuralist writers has influenced our Theory of Knowledge. In the final blog in the series, I will address the critique of structuralism, and consider some post-structuralists.

 

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Cause & Effect in ToK

Establishing cause and effect in ToK underpins so much of ToK, it’s at the heart of Areas of Knowledge (AoKs) Natural Sciences, Human Sciences, Mathematics, and History. Many of the ToK Essay prescribed titles are centrally concerned with establishing cause and effect, yet causality is not one of the ToK concepts (however most of them are linked to causality). In ToK Cause and Effect is not explicitly mentioned at all in The IB ToK Study Guide, and it’s not built into the course structure as a standalone unit. So, today on ToKToday we’re going to redress that balance - we’re going to look at cause and effect in ToK.

Establishing ToK cause and effect relationships is one of the most significant challenges in the pursuit and production of knowledge. It is a fundamental aspect of reasoning, yet the problems of discerning whether A causes B, or if there are other unseen factors at play, can be difficult to untangle.

Establishing ToK cause and effect relationships is one of the most significant challenges in the pursuit and production of knowledge. It is a fundamental aspect of reasoning, yet the problems of discerning whether A causes B, or if there are other unseen factors at play, can be difficult to untangle.

History of causation

Key epistemologists have long grappled with this issue of cause and effect in ToK. Scottish philosopher David Hume, for example, was sceptical about the idea of causality. He suggested that we can never observe cause and effect directly, only their constant conjunction (events occurring together), as such we merely infer causal relationships, rather than knowing them as objective facts.

Following Hume, Immanuel Kant posited that while we may not directly observe causality, we structure our perceptions based on ToK cause and effect. It's an a priori mental schema that allows us to make sense of the world. Without this cognitive structure, he argued, the world would be a chaotic and incomprehensible stream of experiences.

In more recent times, the philosopher Nancy Cartwright, has critiqued the assumption that laws of nature (often seen as ultimate causes in AoK Natural Sciences) universally apply. She claims that many scientific laws only hold under very specific conditions and can't be easily generalised. This raises questions about whether establishing cause and effect in ToK is as straightforward as it seems in AoK Natural Sciences, one of the fields where this approach is considered most valid.

Some of the problems of establishing cause and effect in ToK include:

  • Multiple variables interacting to produce an effect - this makes it difficult to isolate the specific variable combinations required to produce that effect.

  • Identifying the specific conditions in which certain variables are required to produce effects.

  • Identifying whether the relationship between variables and their effects is directly causal or merely associative.

  • Establishing whether the variables identified are primary, or whether they themselves are secondary, or tertiary effects etc.

Theories of knowledge production also recognise that cause and effect in ToK may not always be necessary or possible to establish. The reason is that knowledge is produced for different purposes, and its desired end determines the methods used in its production.

Paradigms & History and Cause & Effect

The philosopher of science, Thomas Kuhn, highlighted how scientific paradigms determine what counts as a legitimate cause or effect. Paradigms, or widely accepted scientific frameworks, shape the questions that can be asked, and thus the knowledge that can be produced. When the paradigm shifts, so too do the cause and effect relationships that were once taken for granted.

In other areas of knowledge, cause and effect relationships may be even more elusive. The AoK Human Sciences is characterised by the complexity and variability of human behaviour often makes it difficult to pinpoint singular causes.

In AoK History Historical knowledge rarely fits neatly into ToK cause and effect  frameworks. The historian E.H. Carr argued that causes in history are multi-layered, and the idea of a singular cause is more of a heuristic device than an accurate representation of the past.

A few words on The Arts and cause & effect

Moreover, in AoK The Arts, knowledge production may be more concerned with evoking emotional responses, exploring aesthetic values, or generating critique, rather than establishing cause and effect. For instance, a novelist might not need to prove a causal link between a character’s upbringing and their later actions; the focus instead might be on a rich and nuanced portrayal of the character’s experience.

So, while establishing cause and effect can offer powerful explanations, and is central to much of our reasoning, it is not always the ultimate aim nor is it always possible in the production of knowledge. By recognising the limits of cause and effect can help us to better understand the complexity of the world, and to appreciate the many ways that knowledge can be produced and used.

If you want more content to help you with ToK check out the learning resources available on our student resources page. You can contact me for help with your ToK Essay or Exhibition either by Facebook Messenger on the TokToday.com website, or by emailing me Daniel@TokToday.com, more details here.

Stay toktastic my friends.

 

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What's the problem with history in ToK ?

In my experience AoK History is the AoK that students find hardest to use in ToK. 

Let me explain why. Most students understand that there can be bias in historical knowledge. They understand that bias can derive from the interpretation of historical evidence, and the production of historical knowledge.

However, not many students understand that the very concept of historical knowledge is highly contested. We can start by roughly identifying 2 broad approaches on what historical knowledge is. These are the Relativist Approach, and the Absolutist Approach.

An example of the problem of historical knowledge.

Let’s start with a concrete example: When did the second world war start ? It seems like a fairly straight forward question. If we google it we are told that WW2 started on 1st september 1939, when Germany invaded Poland. However, France & the UK didn’t declare war on Germany until 3rd September 1939, so did it actually start on 3rd September ? Further, Germany, Poland, UK & France at war isn’t “world war”, it’s European war. Maybe we have to look at the US entry to the war in December 1941 after the bombing of Pearl Harbor. However, the US were supporting UK & France’s war effort from September 1940, so maybe they entered the war then ? Talking of Japan - they invaded Manchuria on 19th September 1931, so maybe that was the start of the second world war, maybe it was the Italian invasion of Abyssinia in Oct 1935, or maybe the Spanish Civil war in 1936 ? Obviously it comes down to definitions, how are we defining the second world war - definitions are all important in ToK, and this is just as evident in AoK History as in any other AoK.

 

One of the main problems with the treatment of AoK History in ToK is that students often engage in the historical record (as I did above), rather than in the production of historical knowledge. ToK studies how historical knowledge is made rather than the historical knowledge itself. Sure there’s an overlap, but the focus needs to be on the construction of the knowledge. This is where relativist and absolutist approaches to historical knowledge come in.

Relativist & Absolutist Approaches to History

Relativist and absolutist approaches to historical knowledge represent two distinct viewpoints concerning our understanding of history. The fundamental difference between the two lies in their beliefs about the nature of truth, objectivity, and the role of perspectives in interpreting historical events.

Absolutists (sometimes grouped with objectivists) believe in the existence of a single, unalterable, and objective truth. They argue that historical events are absolute facts that exist independently of the individuals or societies that perceive them. In other words, absolutists believe that there is a factual truth, or single truth version of history. Or as one student put it recently : an actualité. Absolutist historians aspire to portray history as it "truly" happened, asserting that there is a definitive account of historical events. This truth can be known through meticulous research and comprehensive evidence. They contend that the historian's role is similar to that of a scientist. They're trying to develop an unbiased, detached, and unequivocal understanding of the past. Bias, they believe, can and should be removed through rigorous methodology. Most students that I meet have an absolutist view of history, but in ToK we need to look at more than one perspective. Very few students look at the relativist view of history.

Relativists, often called constructivists, propose that our understanding of history is inherently subjective and multiple truths can coexist. They contend that historical knowledge is not independent of our interpretation but is constructed through the lenses of culture, time, place, and personal perspective. They posit that it's impossible to separate historical facts from the context in which they are understood, implying that historical "truth" is relative to the observer's viewpoint. Relativist historians view their role more as interpreters, giving voice to different perspectives and narratives. They believe bias is inevitable and consider it a part of the narrative that can enrich our understanding of the past.

Evaluation of relativist and absolutist approaches to History

The absolutist approach has been praised for its dedication to objectivity and commitment to the truth. Critics point out that it may oversimplify complex historical events by seeking a singular, definitive narrative and ignoring differing viewpoints. The relativist approach is praised for embracing complexity and multiple perspectives. However it is criticised for its potential to lead to a form of historical relativism where any interpretation could be seen as equally valid, regardless of evidence or logical consistency.

In practice, many historians tend to use a blend of both approaches. They strive for objectivity and rigour while acknowledging that their understanding of the past is inevitably shaped by their perspectives and the context in which they work. This approach helps to create a nuanced, richly textured understanding of history. This makes room for both the pursuit of objective facts and the recognition of subjective interpretations.

So, if you’re considering using AoK History in ToK Essay or Exhibition, consider the different approaches to historical knowledge. Doing so will help you to have a more sophisticated discussion, and to get higher marks !

 

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What can Taylor Swift teach us about Theory of Knowledge ?

A video version of this blog can be found at this link.

Some may say that the narrative songwriting, and self expressive style of Taylor Swift doesn’t necessarily lend itself to ToK, but there’s a lot about ToK that we can learn from Taylor Swift.

1. Ownership of knowledge.

As every Swiftie will know, Taylor's first six albums were bought by Scooter Braun’s Ithaca holdings for $300m in June 2019. Scooter Braun know owns the master rights, including publishing and royalties accrued. Taylor has since re-recorded the first 5 of the 6 albums sold. These re-recorded albums are known as “Taylor’s versions”. 

This closely ties with the ToK theme of Ownership of Knowledge - who owns knowledge, how did they come to own it, and what does it mean to own knowledge ? 

The legal ownership of Taylor’s music is described in a written laws and contracts. In ToK we can have wider definitions of the concept of ownership of knowledge.

 

We could argue that Taylor will always own the first 6 albums regardless of the legal ownership because she wrote them, the ideas will be forever hers, the creative imagination of the lyrics came from her, and therefore will always, inherently, be hers.

However, we could also argue that Taylor’s audience, the community of knowers known as “swifties” own the music as they have ascribe a communal, cultural and collective meaning to her work. 

Finally, we could argue that you - the individual listener - the individual knower owns this music because you interpret it in your own way, you give it your individual meaning, you have a unique perspective on this music - and therefore you own your knowledge of the music.

Let’s move onto the second thing that we can learn about ToK from Taylor Swift:

2. Ethical issues arising from knowing & knowledge production. 

What do the following songs have in common?:

  • Only The Young,

  • Miss Americana & The Heartbreak Prince,

  • The Man

  • Look what you made me do

  • You need to calm down

It’s a broad selection from a range of points in her career, but there is a common ToK theme in all of these songs, let’s precis the key message in each song:

  • Only The Young - Taylor is disappointed by the results of the 2018 midterms, and sees the hopes of young people being let down. 

  • Miss Americana & The Heartbreak Prince - Taylor expresses disillusionment at the state of America under Trump

  • The Man - Taylor challenges the double standards and sexism that she faces in her life

  • Look what you made me do - Taylor takes on her enemies and critics.

  • You need to calm down - Taylor responds to online haters & homophobes, and shows her support for the LGBTQ+ community.

Well, all of these songs are about principles, honesty, virtuous behaviour and hope for a better society. These songs link very closely to the ToK theme of the ethical issues arising from knowing and knowledge production.

In these songs Taylor doesn’t just describe the ills of society, but she takes a stance, and makes a decision that she will take action to improve things (Taylor’s CAS programme), for example in Only The Young she says: “Don’t say you’re too tired to fight / It’s just a matter of time / Up there’s the finish line / So run, and run, and run.”

A theme that runs through all of Taylor’s songs is that it is our responsibility to make the changes that we want to see in our personal lives, and in wider society. This directly links to the ToK theme of whether knowledge is discovered, or is knowledge created ? Taylor is clearly a rationalist (rather than an empiricist) - she’s saying we don’t discover the world, we create our world.

3. Bias in the acquisition and production of knowledge.

OK, let’s move on to our third Taylor ToK Theme, let’s consider Taylor’s monumental song The Story of Us from her third studio album Speak Now, recorded in 2010.

Lyrics: "Now I'm standing alone in a crowded room and we're not speaking / And I'm dying to know is it killing you like it's killing me, yeah / I don't know what to say, since the twist of fate when it all broke down / And the story of us looks a lot like a tragedy now."

Taylor Swift, The Story of Us

"The Story Of Us" - captures the theme of misunderstanding and the inability to see things from the same perspective within a relationship.

Now, as usual Taylor is developing her personal narrative, but the story of us is interesting because she’s extending her narrative to firstly recognise that her now ex-boyfriend has a different perspective, and she would like to know what that perspective is.

The Story of Us is, about perspective, congruence and incongruence, alignment and misalignment of perspective. 

Similarly in ToK we are interested  in perspective, congruence, incongruence, alignment and misalignment of knowledge. We're learning from Taylor - what does her future hold for her?

4. The relationship between new knowledge, pre-existing knowledge & historical knowledge.

As mentioned earlier Taylor has re-recorded all of her music that was sold in 2019, and she has spoken out about her personal feelings about the sale of her music. This echoes a common theme in her lyrics about how the past affects the present, and possibly the future.

If we look at "Long Live" from Taylor's album "Speak Now" she deals with exactly this theme of how the past influences the present and potentially the future. The song reflects on the past memories, the joy of the present, and the hope for the future.

Lyrics: 

Past: "I had the time of my life fighting dragons with you" (This suggests past challenges and victories.)

Present: "Long live the walls we crashed through / I had the time of my life, with you" (This indicates the present experiences and the joys she is currently feeling.)

Future:  " (The lyrics suggest hope for the future, that the memories they create now will be there to support them in future times of need.)

This is also a core theme in ToK - we look at how past knowledge affects present knowledge and future knowledge development. Linked with this we consider how current knowledge is shaped by its historical development, and whether new knowledge is better than old knowledge.

5. Is the world created or discovered ?

Moving on to Taylor Theme no. 5, let’s consider the song  "Dear John" - In this song, Taylor Swift ponders whether her love could have changed someone who was set in his ways. She questions whether she was just naive to think she could have made a difference.

Lyrics: "And I'll look back in regret how I ignored when they said, / 'Run as fast as you can.' / Dear John, I see it all, now it was wrong / Don't you think 19 is too young to be played by your dark twisted games, when I loved you so?"

This links to the ToK question of whether the world is created or discovered ? (the philosophical question of empiricism vs rationalism). This is exploring the question of whether we go out & find the world, or is the world created in our heads ? or It could just be the ways in which the physical world is interpreted and categorised that is internal. Or it could be the meanings that we attach to physical world knowledge that are internal. 

Handing this back to Taylor, in the her reflections on Kanye West’s interruption of her acceptance speech at the 2009 VMAs Taylor asks Kanye (or all of us):

Wasn't it easier in your lunchbox days? / Always a bigger bed to crawl into / Wasn't it beautiful when you believed in everything / And everybody believed in you? / It's alright, just wait and see / Your string of lights is still bright to me / Oh, who you are is not where you've been / You're still an innocent."

This is Taylor wondering whether people can change, or if they were always a certain way, and she makes the point that people can learn and grow from their mistakes.

 

In ToK terms this is Taylor exploring the empiricist vas rationalist question, and coming down on the side of rationalism, which places her in the same school as Descartes, Kant, Socrates, Plato Spinzoa, Locke and Hume.

Which neatly takes us on to today’s final point of ToK learning that we can develop from Taylor’s work.

6. Free Will vs Determinism

In the song Mine Taylor says:

"You made a rebel of a careless man's careful daughter / You are the best thing that's ever been mine."

In this song I think that she is delving into the idea of choosing to love despite the chances of it ending in heartbreak.Taylor seems to be making a conscious decision to love and be in a relationship even though her past and external circumstances might dictate otherwise.

What’s this got to do with ToK? I hear you cry.

Well, the previous point of Taylor’s Tok learning was a consideration of whether the world is discovered or created. Taylor decides that it is created. A created world gives us a lot more freedom of choice to create the world as we wish it to be. On the other hand, a world that we discover has already been created, and predetermined by someone, or something else.

This is the free-will vs determinism debate, it’s both a natural continuation of the empiricism vs rationalism debate, and it’s at the heart of why we study ToK. To what extent are we free to know the world as we choose, and on the other hand to what extent is the world pre-configured for us?

To give the final word on this to Taylor. 

"White Horse" - In the song “White Horse” Taylor seems to discuss the conflict between the dream of an ideal, almost predestined love (a fairy tale love story that might be considered a form of determinism) and the reality of making conscious decisions in a relationship. In this case, she decides to no longer pursue a relationship that doesn't live up to her expectations, exercising her free will.

She sings:  "I'm not a princess, this ain't a fairy tale / I'm not the one you'll sweep off her feet / Lead her up the stairwell / This ain't Hollywood, this is a small town / I was a dreamer before you went and let me down / Now it's too late for you and your white horse, to come around

 

If this blog has inspired you to choose Taylor Swift, or any other element of popular culture as an object pick up a copy of Every Exhibition Prompt Explained (or a range of prompts) from this link.

If you have any suggestions for further artists, or objects from popular culture, that you would like to see analysed using ToK please leave a comment below, or email me at Daniel@ToKToday.com

Daniel, Lisbon, June 2023

If you're looking for more ToK on Popular Culture check out:

The ToK of Minecraft

The ToK of Halo Infinite

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Will AI save my ToK Life?

What is the potential for using Artificial Intelligence (AI) to help us in ToK ? Is it possible that we could use AI to assist us in our ToK Exhibition and ToK Essay without running into problems of academic integrity ? Can AI reduce our workload, increase the quality of work, reduce our stress, increase our productivity, make us better ToK learners, and not get us into trouble with IB ? Yes ! AI can do all of this, and more. In this post I introduce some of the basic do's and don'ts of using AI in ToK.

A video version of this post is available at this link

Don't paste ToK Exhibition Prompts / Essay questions verbatim into the AI prompt box:

I asked ChatGPT 3.0 to answer the ToK Exhibition prompt: What is the relationship between personal experience & knowledge ?

How did Chat GPT do ?

Assessing ChatGPT's answer against the ToK Exhibition Criteria.

I assessed ChatGPT's ToK Exhibition Commentary as 0/10 using the IB ToK Exhibition Assessment Rubric.

ChatGPT would have failed the ToK Exhibition fairly comprehensively because the prompt alone does not contain the range of instructions required to produce a commentary that would achieve a passing grade.

Can AI detection software identify ChatGPT's commentary as written by AI ?

Both GPTZero and ZeroGPT accurately detected ChatGPT's commentary.

How do AI detectors perform when analysing text written by humans ?

BothGPTZero and ZeroGPT accurately detected the commentary that I had written as "Human Written" text.

How can we ethically use AI to help us to write the Exhibition Commentary?

Microsoft Bing is far more accurate and helpful in its use of sources than ChatGPT (this is the status at the time of writing, ChatGPT may get better in the future).

We can ask Bing a more focussed question: "Tell me 3 different ways to understand the relationship between personal experience and knowledge."

Bing gave us 3 ways to understand the relationship between personal experience and knowledge. These could be developed, using our own words, into knowledge claims. Each knowledge claim could have a specific object attached to them.

Bing also gave us 3 sources (ringed in the diagram on the left), one source is a (free) ToK Textbook !, the other source (#2) is also of use. We could use these sources to help us to develop the 3 ways to understand the relationship between personal experience & knowledge that Bing has already given us.

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From this post I hope that you can see that:

Do's:

  • Ask Microsoft Bing targeted and specific knowledge questions. Use its response to give you structures for your ToK Exhibition (don't cut & paste, redevelop its response in your own words).

  • Use the sources that Microsoft Bing gives you to help you to develop its responses in your own worlds.

Don'ts:

  • Don't paste the ToK Exhibition prompt (or Essay Prescribed Title) verbatim into the AI Prompt Box. It will not give you useful content, nor will it meet the assessment criteria.

  • Don't copy and paste AI content without properly citing (ie referencing) it. It will be identified by AI content detectors.

If you have specific requests for AI related content please don't hesitate to get in touch with me at Daniel@ToKToday.com.

We have focussed prompts for AI specifically designed to generate relevant content for the November 2023 ToK Essays available at this link.

Get explanations of all the ToK Exhibition Prompts, including:

  1. An overview explanation of each prompt.

  2. Examples of three knowledge claims for each prompt.

  3. Suggestions for the types of object that would be appropriate for each knowledge claim.

  4. How to structure the ToK Exhibition Commentary.

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How do I use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay ?

How do I use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay ?

ChatGPT could also refer to any other large language model Artificial Intelligence (AI) system.

Underneath this question are a couple of other questions:

  • Am I allowed to use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay?

  • Should I use chat GPT to write my ToK Essay?

Let’s take these in the following order:

  • Am I allowed to use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay?

  • How do I use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay?

  • Should I use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay?

Those last two are very inter-related, and we’ll probably deal with them together.

Am I allowed to use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay ?

On March 15th 2023 International Baccalaureate updated their Academic Integrity Policy to say:

  • AI generated text, image or graphs must be credited & referenced just like any other secondary source.

  • Students should be encouraged to ask [AI] software research questions rather than the essay title.

So, yes - you are allowed to use AI software (such as ChatGPT) as long as you credit it. And you are encouraged to ask AI research questions. Now, we have questions, or prompts, that you can ask AI about each ToK Essay available from TokToday - these prompts are designed to give you content which is specific to your essay.

OK, now we know that you are allowed to use ChatGPT, let’s consider how you should use it to write your ToK Essay.

How do I use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay?

To understand how to use ChatGPT it’s helpful to understand a little about what ChatGPT actually is. It’s called a Large Language Model (LLM), this means that it studies the frequencies of words occurring together in written text, and from this it is able to predict the word that is most likely to come next in a sentence. As such, it doesn’t actually know anything. It’s just selecting words that are most likely to follow each other in response to the question (or prompt) that you ask it.

 

You know more ToK than it does, but it can draw on a wider information base than you to help you to develop your knowledge.

So - the question / prompt that you ask it is super important to ensure that you get specific and relevant content for your essay. If you just cut & paste the essay question into its prompt box it will give you a very generalised response, with lots of vague and non-relevant content.

You need to work out your knowledge arguments beforehand, and ask questions directly about the knowledge arguments, or you can even ask ChatGPT to give you the knowledge arguments. Let’s look at an example from May 2023 session. We’ll use essay #5 May 23: are visual representations helpful in the communication of knowledge in human sciences & maths ?

Rather than directly ask that whole question we break it down, and we use the responses of the AI to build our argument. So, let’s start with the question: "Give me an example from Economics when using a visual representation is better than a written description".

 

From this example you can see that it has given me the example of a supply and demand curve, and it has explained the advantage that “A written description of the relationship between supply and demand can be difficult to understand this involves multiple variables and complex interactions over visual representation such as a graph can make the relationship much clearer and easier to comprehend.” Now in this passage we have the core of an evaluation point for the use of visual representations in Economics (as a Human Science). We would need to develop this advantage of visual representations using ToK concepts or terminology, but we have the beginnings there.

Now, we come to the advantage of AI such as ChatGPT over old search engines. AI remembers what you have already asked it, it’s like you’re have a conversation with it, so we can now ask it: “what are the disadvantages of explaining the law of supply and demand using a graph rather than using a written description ?”

 

Here you can see that it has given us 4 disadvantages of using visual representations, each point could be developed into an evaluation point to be used in either AoK Human Sciences or AoK Mathematics for this essay. Points 2-4 are very rich seams for ToK, and are substantial enough to develop as the whole evaluatory side of the essay - you would just need to use ToK concepts, and real life situation, but tbh you could get ChatGpt are the disadvantages of explaining the law of supply and demand using a graph rather than using a written description ?POT to do that for you as well.

Notice, that rather then just put the whole essay question into ChatGPTs search bar I started by asking it a specific question, and then the next specific question that I asked it built on the response from the first question, I could have continued to do this. This is the 2 part rule for getting relevant and specific content from AI:

(i) Start with a specific question.

(ii) follow up with specific questions based on the AI’s response from earlier in the conversation.

As I mentioned earlier we have questions, or prompts, that you can ask AI about each ToK Essay available from TokToday - these prompts are designed to give you content which is specific to your essay.

Should I use ChatGPT to write my ToK Essay?

Maybe you should use ChatGPT to write your essay, but there are a few issues to take into account. Essentially, it’s contextual, like everything in life. I would say there are 2 big (inter-related) factors in whether you should use ChatGPT to write your essay:

(i) the information it gives may not be accurate (nor relevant, nor specific enough).

(ii) it may be more work to use it than not to use it.

(iii) Your own personal development

Can you trust Ai when writing your ToK Essay?

Remember AI doesn’t actually know anything, it just places words in order based on a predictive algorithm. So, it may give you biased, or even false information, if that’s how the algorithm interprets the word frequencies that it’s finding on the net. For example I recently asked ChatGPT to summarise a specific philosophical argument in the empiricism vs rationalism debate. The philosophical argument I was asking about concerned corroboration of experience, It gave me 300 words on the value of curiosity. Its response had very little to do with the argument that I was asking it to summarise, it was only vaguely connected. I wouldn’t have known this if I hadn’t studied this debate at university, read some articles on JSTOR etc.

Check carefully !

And there’s the first problem - you need to check everything that ChatGPT tells you - you need to check it for biases and inaccuracies. Some of that checking can be done using general Google searches, but some of it will require the use of academic journals such as those found in JSTOR.

And that checking may be more work than just using those traditional academic research sources to begin with. Just start with JSTOR, and use your own selection skills to decide what to include, because your going to have to do this anyway after using ChatGPT.

Is it more work to use Ai to write my ToK Essay ?

This neatly brings us to our second problem which is that ChatGPT may be work to use than not to use:

Not only do you have to check all of the content that it gives you but you also have to adapt any content that is inaccurate, and you have to cite any content that it gives you. So, it can give you factually inaccurate & incorrect information - this has OFTEN happened when I’ve asked it to give me specific academic research on a particular subject, and the other day it even made up a fallacy - a fallacious fallacy so to speak. So, if you find that it has given you inaccurate information you have to adapt the information - which takes time.

Finally, you have to cite it’s content just like any other secondary content (eg Wikipedia). If you get caught pretending that AI content is your own you could be excluded from the DP. The AI plagiarism checkers are getting far better. I have been testing GPTZero and I am yet to fool it, it always correctly identifies content from ChatGPT, and differentiates it from content that I have written myself.

Summary - how to use ChatGPT to write ToK Essay

So, in summary - ChatGPT can be great for giving us ideas for the essay, and for further research. However, relying upon it too much could create more work than just taking its ideas and developing them in the conventional traditional academic fashion (using your own intelligence).

 

Prompts, or questions, for artificial intelligence specific to each ToK Essay can be picked up from this link.

 

For those of you who are taking a more traditional route to writing the ToK Essay detailed essay guidance notes for each ToK Essay, and lots of support can be picked up from this link

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ToK Essay 6 Nov 23: Selection & Significance.

ToK Essay 6 Nov 23: With a vast amount of information, how do we select what is significant when acquiring knowledge?

 Refer to natural sciences and one other area of knowledge.

 

Significance and selection are important concepts in this prescribed title. Factors that attribute significance could include the intended purpose of the knowledge, the pre-existing knowledge frameworks pertaining to the information, the pre-existing knowledge of the knower, and a wide range of contextual factors such as culture. How we select information will very much depend upon a range of factors including the area of knowledge under consideration, the type of information being selected, and the intended use of that information.

It should become immediately clear that this prescribed title offers a wide range of routes that students can take in answering the question. We are asked to discuss the title "with reference to Natural Sciences and one other area of knowledge". As usual, students may want to consider choosing an area of knowledge which provides a good contrast in the knowledge argument that they are making. for example, if the key knowledge arguments concern the methodology of knowledge production then human Sciences may not provide a good contrast with the natural sciences. 

ToK Essay 6 Nov 23: Selection

The selection part of this essay could be considered in terms of the 5 W's:

  • Who is selecting the knowledge and attributing significance? 

  • What type of information is being selected / available to the selector (knower) ?

  • Why is the selector (knower) selecting information for the acquisition of knowledge ?

  • What is the intended purpose of the information being selected ?

A range of knowledge arguments could be developed under each of these questions, and linked into any of the areas of knowledge. there are obvious clear real life examples arising from each of these questions. The detailed essay notes “10 Arguments for PT#6 Nov 23” goes into this in a lot more detail, unpacks each argument, includes evaluation points and suggestions for RLS .

ToK Essay 6 Nov 23: Significance

The significance element of the question is more sophisticated, and will probably be the aspect which differentiates  high-marked essays from those given more modest marks. The significance of knowledge can be considered in many ways including:

  • Purpose

  • influence on the development of the discipline / area of knowledge

  • contextual or cultural attribution

  • pre-existing knowledge / perspectives / paradigm of the discipline / AoK

  • pre-existing knowledge framework of the knower

Many knowledge arguments could be developed under any of those headings, all of which would be appropriate for any area of knowledge. The discussion around Significance takes us into some really interesting areas such as the causal direction of the influence of knowledge, hierarchies of knowledge ,and classification / categorisation of knowledge (including the boundaries of disciplines / AoK).

There is a wonderfully wide, and rich, range of ToK discussions to be had arising from this essay. We go into these in far more detail in the essay notes “10 Arguments for PT#6”, those notes are over  8,300 words long, and include evaluation points, real life situations and the implications of knowledge arguments.

We also have 25 Questions for AI for ToK Essay 6 Nov 23. These questions are designed to get specific responses from AI in order to give you more relevant content for your essay. Remember to check the content that AI gives you (it is not always accurate), and cite it as you would cite any other secondary source.

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ToK Essay 5 Nov 23: "The world is the way we understand it"

“the world isn’t just the way it is, it is how we understand it—and in understanding something, we bring something to it” (adapted from Life of Pi by Yann Martel)? 

Is this always the case ?

Discuss with reference to history and the natural sciences.

So at the start of the this essay we have a clear proposition that the world is constructed or created by our processes of understanding it. In philosophy this is called a rationalist argument, however you don't necessarily need (or want) to refer to the philosophical debate between rationalism and empiricism. That said this debate will very much underpin the discussion that I bring to this essay.

Let's start by quickly looking at some of the interesting words used in the prescribed title, and the first phrase of Interest here is the world isn't just the way it is. the use of the isn't just and later use of the phrase bring something to it, would indicate that the human construction of knowledge is an additive process, i.e. we add to that which is gained from the senses rather than essentially alter, or change, it.

 The use of the term understanding in the quote indicates that this process is one in which we bring meaning to the world that is presented to us. This is a rich area for further discussion in the essay should students choose to take this route. 

ToK Essay 5 Nov 23 - a few overview arguments

In these overview notes we will quickly and broadly look at to arguments for supporting the proposition in the prescribed title, and to arguments evaluating or opposing the proposition in the prescribed title. in the essay guidance notes “10 Arguments for essay #5 “ we go into a lot more detail on 10 arguments including knowledge arguments, evaluations or counterclaims, suggestions for real life situations, and implications arising from the knowledge arguments. Those notes are over 8,300 words long and give you a lot more than can be achieved in this web page. 

ToK Essay 5 Nov 23 - interpretation

Argument one for the proposition could be that The interpretation that we bring to the world doesn't radically change the external reality so much as give it internal meaning. This argument could be applied to either AoK History or AoK Natural Sciences. The essential argument here is that our additive interpretation (understanding) doesn’t radically change the world, but just makes it gives it a representative meaning so that we can label it and categorise it within pre-existing knowledge frameworks. Students who have studied Knowledge and Language as an optional theme can draw upon some of the debates covered in that unit. 

This argument is easier to apply to AOK Natural Sciences than it is to AOK history. in Natural Sciences we would be arguing that the scientific method produces objective and accurate data about an external reality, and then human interpretation of that data retains the essential features and characteristics of that external reality. To apply this argument to AoK history we need to develop an understanding of a process which minimise the role of perspective and subjective biases in the historiographical process. Well this is a hard argument to make, it is not an impossible argument. Students following this argument may want to look at the production of historical knowledge as a process of empiricism. This is explored in a lot more detail in the essay guidance notes.

ToK Essay 5 Nov 23 - interpretation (different perspective)

Argument two is that the world we experience is largely an interpreted world rather than a real world. in philosophy this would be called irrationalism however you don't have to use this term in your essay. The argument here is that we select, group, label, categorise, and add meaning, to the experiences of the world. As such we fundamentally change what we know about the world around us.

This argument can be applied to both AOK history and AoK Natural Sciences. however it is far more straightforward to apply to AOK history. Students who would like to follow this route should consider looking at history as a product of human construction, or history as a rationalist process. The argument in history is a constructionist argument that we select specific historical knowledge, and interpret it in ways that serve pre-existing knowledge, to confirm a preferred world view. The arguments in the Natural Sciences would be that the operationalization of variables and the interpretation of scientific result fundamentally changes that which is observed. again, we go into this in a lot more detail in the detailed essay guidance notes .

ToK Essay 5 Nov 23 - reality

Turning towards arguments against the proposition in the prescribed title. The first arguments would be that the external world is how we experience it, we do not add things in through interpretation. As such we are arguing that our knowledge of the world is objective and accurate. This is an empiricist argument (however you do not have to use that term in your essay). This argument could be used both for AOK history and AOK Natural Sciences, however it is far easier to make for AOK natural sciences. The hypothetical deductive scientific method is essentially an empirical method which is designed to minimize human interpretation and subjectivity. 

ToK Essay 5 Nov 23 - context

The final argument covered here, concerns the role of context in our understanding of the world. An argument could be developed that the degree to which we interpret external reality is dependent upon the context of the knower, and the knowledge that they are acquiring at that time. Context can include a very wide range of factors including the cultural perspectives of the knower, the intention and purpose of the knower, the type of knowledge that is being acquired, and the pre-existing knowledge frameworks. 

This argument lends itself particularly well to AOK history, but can also be applied in AOK natural sciences. Contrasts could be drawn using real life situations in AoK history. We could consider historical knowledge which has been produced for different purposes, or within different cultures, or by historians with different perspectives. This will show the role of context influencing the different ways that the same historical event has meaning (“understanding”) attached to it. This argument is developed and a lot more detail, including real life examples that you could draw upon, in the detailed guidance essay notes.

We also have 25 questions that you could ask artificial intelligence (such as ChatGPT, or Bard) to help you to write this essay.

This is just a brief overview of four of the arguments that could be used in this essay.  Our detailed guidance notes have a lot more detail on these, and six other arguments.

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ToK Essay #4 Nov 23: Values problematic

PT#4Nov23: Is it problematic that knowledge can be shaped by the values of knowledge producers ?Discuss with reference to any two areas of knowledge.

Choice of AoK

You have the choice of any areas of knowledge, therefore We recommend that you choose two areas that have good contrasting methodologies in the production of knowledge. you're going to be looking at the influence of values on the production of knowledge and therefore the role of the knowledge producer will be crucial. if they have different roles then you can contrast the influence of values. a typical good contrast might be between area of knowledge the Arts and area of knowledge natural science.

ToK Concepts

 This essay lends itself perfectly to the use of the 12 ToK Concepts.The May 2022 subject report recommends that students use the concepts in their essays. any of the 12 Concepts can be applied in this essay. I have outlined four of the concepts below, and I go into the details of 10 of the concepts in the essay guidance notes 10 arguments for essay number four, available at this link.

Problematic

Students will need to define the term problematic or problem as it's at the center of the prescribed title. you may want to think about who is defining the idea that it may be a problem, what type of a problem, a problem for whom, or what? you may also want to consider whether problems are universal or context bound, Etc

Let's move on to look at how four of the ToK Concepts could be used to answer this prescribed title.

Interpretation

In any area of knowledge the knowledge producer interprets  many stages of the knowledge production process including  the object to be produced, the way in which it is to be produced, and the evidence arising from the method of production. the ways in which knowledge is produced varies by area of knowledge and knowledge producer but it all includes interpretation. the important thing about interpretation is that it is informed by values. the values of the knowledge producer influence the way in which all stages of the knowledge production process are interpreted. This argument can be developed in various ways depending upon the area of knowledge chosen. 

Whether the interpretation of value-based knowledge is a problem or not depends upon a range of factors such as the values held by the person who is interpreting the knowledge, the values of the context within which the knowledge is interpreted, and interpretation of the purpose of the knowledge and it's alignment with the knower.

(I go into a lot more detail on this, including real life examples, in the essay Guidance Notes).

Culture

Culture could be described as a set of values, interwoven with a system of Symbols and meanings. as such, a fairly coherent argument can be developed that culture (& cultural values) influences the production of knowledge. Whether the influence of  cultural values is a problem very much depends upon a wide range of issues including the cultural alignment of the person who is defining the problem, the culturally defined purpose and value of the knowledge produced, and the resultant evolution of culture over time resulting from the knowledge produced.

Evidence

The values of the knowledge producer can affect both the production, identification and interpretation of evidence. that which is considered evidence is, arguably, very much influenced by the values of the person considering it. Different areas of knowledge place different emphases on the nature of evidence, different types of knowledge constitute evidence in different ways according to the area of knowledge. As such, students who are writing this essay could contrast what evidence looks like in for example AoK mathematics with what evidence looks like in for example AoK The Arts. 

Potentially this is problematic in terms of the objectivity and purpose of the knowledge produced. Again, this will very much depend upon the values of the person who is making the judgement on whether it is problematic. 

Justification

Arguably values influence the justification for producing new knowledge, and then the justification for the use of that new knowledge. such justification may be based upon the values of the knowledge producer, the institution to which they may be long, the academic discipline that they are working in, or wider society. values based justification is potentially problematic for a range of reasons including the hierarchical use of knowledge for the articulation of power, Producing biased perspectives, and disregarding aspects of knowledge. In a typical ends versus means type argument justification can lead to legitimisation, if the values underpinning the justification are not shared by a large sector of society this could be problematic at ethical, moral and cohesive levels.

The Essay Guidance notes "10 Arguments for essay 4" go into a lot more detail on the four concepts above, and on six other concepts. Those notes also include

  • definitions of terms

  • real life examples

  • evaluation

  • implication points.

We also have 25 prompt questions that you can ask artificial intelligence such as chat GPT to give you the detailed and specific content that can be appropriately applied in your essay. 

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ToK Essay 3 Nov 23 "Dangerous Experts"

ToK Essay 3 Nov 23 "Dangerous Experts":

In the acquisition of knowledge, is unquestioningly following experts just as dangerous as completely ignoring them? Discuss with reference to the human sciences and one other area of knowledge.

The Acquisition of knowledge is generally taken as gaining knowledge, or becoming knowledgeable. Whilst this term is not defined in the ToK Study guide it can be assumed that it refers to the process of becoming a knower. Learning, in both formal and informal senses, is a process of knowledge acquisition. 

Choice of Area of Knowledge - ToK Essay 3 Nov 23 Dangerous Experts.

You are directed to use Human Sciences, and are given a free choice on the other AoK. You may want to pick an AoK which gives a contrast to ways of acquiring knowledge in Human Sciences as your second AoK. This could also be (indirectly) linked to a contrast method of producing knowledge. Consider whether ways of acquiring knowledge in AoK Maths, History or The Arts contrasts well with AoK Human Sciences ? A good contrast in the processes of acquiring knowledge will give you greater potential for developing good evaluation, and implication, points in the essay.

A hard choice.

We are offered a choice between “following unquestioningly” or “ignoring completely”. Obviously we want to sometimes accept, sometimes ignore, sometimes accept critically, and sometimes ignore in an informed manner. However, these choices are not given to us. It is advised that students directly address the choices given in the PT before arguing for any of the nuanced positions between these two choices. You will need to explain to the examiner why you are rejecting the two positions given if you want to argue for an ‘in-between’ position.

Further, the focus of the question is actually asking us which is the more dangerous of the two choices given. As such, we can assume that the safer nuanced (in between) position is less important than the relative dangers posed by the two positions given. It is advised that students focus discussion on the relative dangers of the two positions rather than the in-between preferred positions.

Experts

Consider who these ‘experts’ are in each area of knowledge. Questions that could lead to knowledge points include:

  • How did they become to be labelled as ‘experts’ ? 

  • Do ‘experts’ all share the same perspective in a discipline / AoK ? 

  • Are there competing ‘experts’ ? 

  • Why are they labelled ‘experts’ ? 

  • Are we considering the expert themselves, or their knowledge ?

Danger.

You will need to think about what these ‘dangers’ are that could arise from following / completely ignoring these experts. Danger to what / whom ? Danger for what ? You may want to consider the development of the Area of Knowledge, the type of knowledge produced, or the uses of that knowledge. There can be obvious links to ethics here, which could be contrasted with arguments regarding objectivity.  

Objectivity.

In directing us to consider AoK Human Sciences we are offered the opportunity to consider the function / purposes of the Human Sciences. This is a rich area for debate and discussion. There is a potential debate between the objectivity of the Human Sciences vs the ethical implications of knowledge developed in the Human Sciences. If you study Economics, Environmental Systems, Geography or Psychology this debate will be evident to you. Students taking Business Management can also develop such debates regarding ethical business practices etc. This is an area where there are clear opportunities for you to draw upon the content of your Group 3 Diploma Subject. Ask your Grp 3 teacher for advice if you are unsure of the debate between ethics and objectivity in your essay.

Ethics.

The discussion concerning ethics could occur at 2 levels:

(i) The ethical consequences of ignoring / unquestioningly accepting the application of the knowledge that experts produce.

(ii) The ethical consequences for the development of knowledge in the discipline / AoK of ignoring / unquestioningly accepting the knowledge that experts produce.

Context

The context of the expert’s knowledge, the acceptance / rejection of experts, and the application of the expert’s knowledge will change. As such the dangers posed by accepting / rejecting experts will also change. This provides a rich seam of discussion in any area of knowledge. Context provides great evaluation and implication points for any Area of Knowledge.

Confirmation Bias

Following people unquestioningly, and ignoring them completely, potentially gives rise to a range of fallacies (see this post on fallacies), particularly confirmation bias. Any AoK can give great opportunity for a discussion on confirmation bias in the acquisition of knowledge, and its consequences for the development of biased perspectives of the knower.

Foundational / Definitive Knowledge.

There is a potential discussion around the scope, or definition, of a discipline / AoK. Is there a set of ‘expert knowledge’ which must be acquired in order to develop an understanding of that discipline ? For example, can you study economics without learning about theoretical vs empirical models, Macro & Micro Economics, Pluralist vs Free Market models etc ? Obviously economics students are not taught to accept this knowledge ‘unquestioningly’, they are taught how to evaluate this knowledge. However, arguably they are following the evaluative knowledge unquestioningly as well…,

Innovation / development of new knowledge

One way of thinking about AoKs is whether the acquisition of knowledge in that AoK is more “top-down” or “bottom-up”. Top-down processes are more hierarchical in which the knower is discouraged from developing critical, personal, perspectives. Bottom up processes of acquisition are led more by enquiry, in which the knower is encouraged to develop their own perspectives. Contrasting two AoKs in this way will allow the student to develop an argument about the dangers which may be inherent to, or arise from, either type of knowledge acquisition process.

These arguments, and many more developed in far more detail in the notes: 10 Arguments for ToK Essay #3 available from TokToday - those notes contain

  • knowledge arguments

  • evaluation points

  • Implications of knowledge arguments

  • suggested real life situations (with references)

We also have a list of 25 questions that you can ask Artificial Intelligence (such as ChatGPT) about ToK Essay #3. These questions are designed to get relevant content which is appropriate for this ToK Essay.

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ToK Essay 2 Nov 23: Beautiful Patterns

PT#2 N23  If “the mathematician’s patterns, like the painter’s and the poet’s, must be beautiful” - what would be the impact on the production of mathematic and artistic knowledge?

ToK Essay 2 Nov 23 beautiful patterns:

This question could be approached as a consideration of the ways in which knowledge is made (produced, constructed, discovered) rather than about the knowledge itself. The PT does direct us to consider the “impact on the production of knowledge”.

 

Beautiful subject rather than object.

If it’s about the production of knowledge, rather than the knowledge produced, its about subject rather than object. The word “beauty” could lead a lot of people to think that it’s about the object of knowledge production, however we’d advise students to focus on subject rather than object.

Obviously, subject and object are linked, and the former may lead to the latter. Maybe a good place to start is to think about the reasons why mathematicians make knowledge, and compare it with the possible reasons for artists making knowledge. 

Purposes of knowledge production.

There’s potentially a nice contrast in the purposes for knowledge production in The Arts and Mathematics. We could compare the debate in Mathematics between Pure and Applied Maths with the debate in The Arts over whether artists make knowledge for themselves or for their audience.

That debate in Maths would be that Pure Maths is made purely to extend mathematical knowledge, whilst Applied Maths is made to solve real world problems. Conversely, the debate in the Arts would be that some art is made just for the artist to express their inner world, whilst other art is made to engage the audience  (“the knower”).

Link "beautiful patterns" and interpretation. 

Beauty is often thought of as a relativist concept (“beauty is in the eye of the holder”).

We’d advise students to be wary of relativist arguments as they are rarely sufficient to attract high marks in the ToK Essay. 

Potentially, a more substantial argument would be that true beauty in the production of knowledge should be free from / independent of external constraints such as audience preferences in the arts, and real world problems in Mathematics. 

A further argument could be developed around the role of interpretation in the production of knowledge. Processes of interpretation of knowledge in the arts could change both how patterns are identified and how they are used in the production of knowledge. 

As such the role of interpretation in the production of artistic knowledge could change the explanations, justifications and perspectives pertaining to that knowledge - which in itself could change the definition and attribution of beauty.

In Maths the interpretation of pre-existing knowledge (e.g. axioms, theorems and models) could affect both the justifications and evidence used by mathematicians. This could be further applied to the discussion of the relationship between forms, objects and theorems in Maths. 

The role of context in the production of (beautiful) mathematical and artistic knowledge.

There’s a really interesting debate to be had about whether the patterns are merely context bound, or are they universal. This debate could be developed to consider whether beauty is also context bound or universal. This could be further developed to consider whether the methodologies of knowledge production are context bound or universal.

If the patterns, beauty and even the methodology are context bound then there may not be an underlying near aesthetic structure to mathematical and artistic knowledge (as implied by Mr Hardy) because that definition of beauty is ever changing. 

These arguments, and many more developed in far more detail in the notes: 10 Arguments for ToK Essay #2 available from TokToday - those notes contain

  • Over 9000 words of ToK content.

  • knowledge arguments

  • evaluation points

  • Implications of knowledge arguments

  • suggested real life situations (with references)

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Essay 1 Nov 23: Facts alone - Enough?

ToK Essay 1 Nov 23 Facts alone - are they enough to prove a claim ? This question gives you the freedom to choose any two areas of knowledge to discuss. Choose wisely as this will make writing the essay far easier. 

Structure - it's a fact!

Students are advised to choose two areas of knowledge which give them good contrasts in both the production of knowledge, and have contrasting methodologies for proving claims.

If your two areas of knowledge differ a lot in these areas then it will be easier to develop evaluation points (giving you higher marks in your ToK essay).

 

In this essay we’re going to try to develop a continuum of arguments. We want to make some arguments that facts are enough to prove claims. In doing so we’re going to be interested in different ways of proving claims, different types of proof, and varying definitions of proof.

We are also going to want to make some arguments that facts are not enough to prove claims, and we’ll consider what other things might be needed to prove claims (and in doing so we’re going to bring in ToK concepts like evidence, justification, interpretation and maybe even TRUTH).

The command term is “Discuss”, therefore you need to consider different perspectives in the essay. (We have produced 10 Arguments for Essay #1 November 2023 that cover a range of different knowledge arguments that could be used - you can pick those notes up from this link).

What makes a fact: necessary or sufficient?

We could think about this question in terms of whether facts are necessary or sufficient to prove a claim. At a more sophisticated level we could consider what is necessary, and what is sufficient, to establish a fact in the first place. 

Necessary conditions are conditions that must be met in order for a particular outcome to occur, while sufficient conditions are conditions that, if met, will guarantee that the outcome will occur. Here are some examples that illustrate the difference between necessary and sufficient conditions:

  1. Necessary but not sufficient: In order to pass a maths test, it is necessary to know the material. However, knowing the material is not sufficient to guarantee that one will pass the test. Other factors, such as test-taking skills and time management, may also be necessary to pass the test.

  2. Sufficient but not necessary: If a person has a college degree, it may be sufficient to qualify for a particular job. However, having a college degree is not a necessary condition for all jobs, as some may require other qualifications or skills.

  3. Both necessary and sufficient: In order to become a licensed physician, it is both necessary and sufficient to graduate from medical school and complete a residency program. This means that without completing these requirements, one cannot become a licensed physician, and completing them guarantees that one will become a licensed physician.

  4. Neither necessary nor sufficient: Having a driver's licence is neither a necessary nor a sufficient condition for owning a car. While having a licence may be helpful, it is not necessary as some people may choose to hire a driver or use public transportation. Additionally, having a licence is not sufficient as owning a car also requires purchasing or leasing a vehicle.

Applying different types of facts to Areas of Knowledge

Setting up the different conditions for what is sufficient, and what is necessary, to prove a claim can change whether a claim is proven. Different Areas of Knowledge will have different criteria for defining what is necessary, and what is sufficient, for proof. Do these constitute "facts alone?"

Turning to some of the arguments that facts alone are not sufficient to prove a claim. When we look at some of the more qualitative Areas of Knowledge such as The Arts or History, facts are not quite as definitive as they are in the Sciences or Maths. This can give us a bit more freedom to debate whether facts can stand alone as proof of a claim.

In both AoK The Arts and AoK History we could have a good discussion about what a fact is, you could consider:

  • Who is constructing the fact.

  • Their intention / purpose for constructing it.

  • Who validates it as a fact.

  • What knowledge was included, and what was excluded in the establishment of the fact.

  • What are the perspectives which both led to, and arise from, the fact.

  • What values underlie the fact.

If you follow this argument you need to remember that the essay title is not whether facts exist, but whether they can be used alone to prove a claim. As such, this argument is that no fact exists entirely on its own, but all facts are subject to a knowledge construction process, and the degree to which a fact proves something depends upon the degree to which the knowledge production process is accepted as objective.

The role of perspectives is crucial in the construction of facts in both AoK The Arts and AoK History. Further, different methods of knowledge construction can produce different facts. This means that maybe different types of proof are needed for different types of evidence, maybe we could have differing thresholds of proof, or maybe proof isn’t possible at all, despite the so-called “facts”. We could consider this in terms of a hierarchical construction of proof in a power based value system

These arguments can also apply to AoK Maths, Human Sciences, and Natural Sciences.

Considering AoK The Arts in a bit more detail. We may want to consider what constitutes a fact in artistic knowledge. Is the meaning of artistic knowledge decided by the audience or by the artist? 

Knowledge arguments could be developed around the connotation and denotation of knowledge. Part of the essay could be based on the debate between artistic knowledge as object vs artistic knowledge as a process of subject. 

The role of context in the production of knowledge (in any AoK) could also be considered. Context can be applied to any of the areas of knowledge, it can change both the definition and labelling of facts, the production of knowledge, and the interpretation of knowledge. Context opens up a range of ToK concepts such as Culture, Interpretation, Justification, Explanation and Objectivity. 

This is just a very brief overview of a few of the issues that we explore in detail in 10 Knowledge Arguments for Essay#1 November 23. Those notes give you:

  • detailed knowledge arguments

  • definitions of terms

  • evaluation points

  • implications

  • suggestions for real life situations. 

Those notes are over 10,000 words long, so there’s more than enough there to help you with your essay.

Secondly, We have “25 questions for Chat GPT to help you with your ToK Essay”. IB are allowing you to use ChatGPT (and other AI’s) in your ToK Essay, so long as you properly reference content that it produces. The thing with ChatGPT is that you have to know exactly the right questions to ask it to get the right content and answers out of it. This document will help you to ask it the right questions.

 
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Fallacies in ToK

In ToK we are concerned with questions such as how knowledge is acquired, the nature of truth, and the extent of our knowledge. One of the key challenges in ToK is identifying and avoiding fallacies – errors in reasoning that can lead us to false conclusions. In this blog post, we will explore the main types of fallacies found in ToK.

1. Ad Hominem Fallacy

The ad hominem fallacy is a type of fallacy in which the arguer attacks the person making the argument rather than the argument itself. In ToK, this fallacy might take the form of dismissing an argument because of the person making it rather than addressing the merits of the argument. For example, if someone argues that climate change is real, and someone else dismisses the argument by saying that the person making the argument is a liberal, that would be an ad hominem fallacy.

2. Straw Man Fallacy

The straw man fallacy is a type of fallacy in which the arguer misrepresents the opponent's argument in order to make it easier to attack. In ToK, this might occur when someone misrepresents an opposing view in order to make their own view appear stronger. For example, if someone argues that atheism is the belief that there is no god, and an atheist argues that atheism is simply the absence of belief in a god, the theist would be committing a straw man fallacy by misrepresenting the atheist's position.

3. Appeal to Authority Fallacy

 

The appeal to authority fallacy is a type of fallacy in which the arguer cites an authority figure in order to support their argument, without providing any further evidence or argumentation. In ToK, this might occur when someone argues that a particular belief is true simply because an expert or authority figure says it is true. However, this is not a valid argument, as experts and authority figures can also be wrong or biased.

4. False Dilemma Fallacy

The false dilemma fallacy is a type of fallacy in which the arguer presents only two options as though they are the only options, when in fact there may be other possibilities. In ToK, this might occur when someone argues that either science or religion can provide us with the truth about the world, ignoring the possibility that both may be useful in different ways.

5. Circular Reasoning Fallacy

The circular reasoning fallacy is a type of fallacy in which the arguer uses the conclusion of the argument as one of the premises. In ToK, this might occur when someone argues that a particular belief is true because it is supported by scripture, and then uses the belief in scripture as evidence for the truth of the belief. This is not a valid argument, as it simply assumes the truth of the conclusion.

In conclusion, fallacies can be a major obstacle to gaining knowledge and understanding in ToK. By being aware of the most common types of fallacies, we can better identify them and avoid them in our own reasoning and arguments. This, in turn, can help us to arrive at more accurate and well-supported conclusions about Knowledge acquisition and production.

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Are all swans white? (Falsification)

The Principle of Falsification in Theory of Knowledge

The Falsification Principle is a method used in science to test the validity of scientific statements or theories. It was first introduced by philosopher Karl Popper, who argued that scientific knowledge must be testable and falsifiable, meaning that it must be possible to demonstrate that it is false. In other words, a scientific statement or theory can only be considered true if it is possible to prove it false.

 

To illustrate the Falsification Principle, let us consider the statement "all swans are white". If this statement is true, then every swan that has ever existed or will exist must be white. However, this statement can be falsified if just one black swan is found. The discovery of a black swan would prove that the statement "all swans are white" is false, as it would contradict the statement's claim that all swans are white. This example demonstrates the power of the Falsification Principle, as it shows how a single observation can disprove a theory or statement.

The Falsification Principle is important for establishing objective knowledge in science because it provides a way to test scientific statements and theories. By attempting to falsify a theory, scientists can determine whether it is true or not. If a theory withstands numerous attempts at falsification, it becomes more likely to be true. This process of testing and refining scientific knowledge helps to establish a strong foundation of objective knowledge that can be relied upon for future research.

One of the key benefits of the Falsification Principle is that it prevents scientists from making unfalsifiable claims. An unfalsifiable claim is one that cannot be proven false, and therefore cannot be tested using the scientific method. For example, the claim that "God exists" is unfalsifiable, as it is not possible to prove that God does not exist. Since this claim cannot be tested, it falls outside the realm of science.

The Falsification Principle also helps to prevent scientists from making unjustified claims. By requiring that scientific statements and theories be testable and falsifiable, the Falsification Principle ensures that human and natural scientists do not make claims that cannot be supported by evidence. This helps to maintain the integrity of scientific research and ensures that scientific knowledge is based on sound evidence.

In conclusion, the Falsification Principle is an important tool in AoK Human Science and Natural Science for establishing objective knowledge. By requiring that scientific statements and theories be testable and falsifiable, the Falsification Principle ensures that scientific knowledge is based on sound evidence and prevents scientists from making unfalsifiable or unjustified claims. The example of "all swans are white" demonstrates how the Falsification Principle can be used to test scientific statements and theories, and how it can help to establish a strong foundation of objective knowledge in science.

Daniel, Lisbon, March 2023

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